~By the creek~

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By the boiling creek
I stood with pearls on my cheek
It was dark
Like a sleeping nook

A creek gull yelled,
In the east sky, where wind swelled
The sky was moonless
Like an angry Goddess

The stars were asleep
With no yearn for another peep
Can you hear that song,
Flowing by the shore along?
On the citadels it echoes
And spreading like a breeze pathos

O flowing glee,
Let me walk to thee
To embrace thy depths
Surrendering whole my breath..
..my whole panting breath!



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19 comments:

Brian Miller said...

my whole panting breath....hot poem! nicely done.

Maha said...

O flowing glee,
Let me walk to thee
To embrace thy depths
Surrendering whole my breath..
..my whole panting breath!

I totally love that part. You've got a really beautiful blog in here :) Looking forward to more of your creations.

♥ Braja said...

nice

Anonymous said...

Hey, when prabhu said...
No.. you are not allowed back. There's still wonders waiting for you, in life's store! Stay back.. & smile!

why embrace thy depth, when there is so much to see this side....
Walk away from thee...
We need the pearl on your cheek.....

Rose Marie Raccioppi said...

Of the ever present quest your words do tell
...surrendering... panting breath...
I know that giving over very well
And you dear friend I see
Call to this longing with "flowing glee."

Thank you for this journey... and the song now heard.

Rose Marie

Alex said...

very, very, moving....

Bernie said...

You have a wonderful gift......:-) Hugs

Tina said...

I don't always respond to poetry, but there's something special in yours that spoke to me.

Tina
htt://www.thecleanwhitepage.com

Ariel said...

Beautiful lines...To embrace the depths of happiness... Love this line.The picture looks great too.
Thank you for visiting ariel.

Shadow said...

my mind is filled with images. images i love.

Aayushi Mehta said...

You are one of the most amazing poets I have come across of late...loved this poem...evokes beautiful images, and well - rhymed...

My favorite lines:

"Can you hear that song,
Flowing by the shore along?
On the citadels it echoes
And spreading like a breeze pathos"

Ekanthapadhikan said...

That was a real nice poem and well crafted too. Keep going, dear friend.

And thanks for your comments on my song blog.

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

lovely poem!


Jingle
http://www.jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com

Cinderella said...

Wonderfully concocted! This space is gr8, so I'm gonna come back. I love your template btw.

And thnx for dropping by on Handwritten.
:)

Maha said...

I've given you an award on my blog, come and check it out!

Anonymous said...

:))..T

aria said...

Loved the last para.. rings like a song and I can hear a guitar strumming somber notes in the background..

Rose Marie Raccioppi said...

Tamarind, Thank you for your visits to APOGEE Poet. Your comments are ever a delight - reflecting such a deep knowing of my intent. Blessings to you and gratitude for the magical visions held "By the Creek." In loving friendship, Rose Marie

Anonymous said...

Hello, where are you? Missing you,
Have you
.....walk to thee
To embrace thy depths
...??

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